Reviews for Umichan Dark Winter

[Gamerx8]

Good!

Came out quite okay, but it might use a little bit more work on it.

Vortex00 responds:

In what areas are you referring to?

[shades9a]

Very Nicely Drawn

This is a very good flash.

Vortex00 responds:

Thanks

[LegolaSS]

ah so your not dead :P

you really need to pick up the pace, it was like watching it in slow motion, i think you could have really speeded things up ALOT... some nice graphics and some understanding about the story... but its major downside is how long it takes to get through the story...

i think alot of people will comment on how slow it runs as well... i dont know if its just my computer but it felt like an age for things to get moving "story wise and animation".... athough there wasnt really that much of a story so far anway... looking forward to what else you do... but thats my major problem with it... "make it move quicker and smoother!"

Vortex00 responds:

Yeah I didn't test it out on different computers, so the animation might be laggy, I wouldn't know.

It's just not as faced paced as submissions normally submitted on here.. quick and to the point. I'm not trying to match them so much. Just doing my own thing, at the speed that I felt like it should have been.

I was trying get the viewer into the surroundings at the start.. dark, cold and silent, while watching, waiting and calculating from above.

I have a few things coming in January.

Thanks for the review. Yeah I'm not dead lulz >_>;