Reviews for Alfred's StoryofChristmas

[Wampbit]

Graphically reasonable but lacking humour

Lets start with your animation: It's quite good, the expressions are done well, the drawn backgrounds are nice however your incorporation of various animated elements is crude, and it shows tha way - I'm not sure if that's a purposeful element of style, but for me it doesn't work. The contrast between well animated characters and some of the more crude animations just created an unfinished feel for me.

In terms of your humour, it wasn't really funny. The underlying comic factor was immature and didn't have enough scope to last a film of your length - and although there was potential for a funny parody the jokes made were highly typical and derivative. Ironic considering the genre is 'Comedy - Original' - a distinct lack of originality is seen.

Your animation has potential - polish up on your graphical weak points and discrepancies, then focus on building up your humour. If you just don't hit the spot I would prompt you to be an animator and let others focus on the script.

[SilverWhitefang]

Silly Alfred.

ok for this video there is some flaws.

The sound could of been better, with the random shouts that ended up having static in there.

Animation was alright.

Humor of the plot of the video was so so.

Overall i will give a 7/10 star random.

4/5 faces. {Because i did laugh at some bits. x3}

[FatKidWitAJetPak]

Ok well

1/10 for the humor.

9/10 for the graphics.

That is pretty self explanatory. Great art, but it wasnt funny at all. You have some good material and I loved the way you colored some things thats preety cool. You just need a different writer, which is just fine. Some of the most famous artists cant write at all. Good luck.

[Ocere]

Alfred is a silly dog

I thought the voices and jokes were fairly hit or miss. There were points I really liked and then points where it just seemed dull. I think the timing on the voices and, more importantly, Alfred's faces made most of the jokes in this. As such, the Bush joke was pretty dull and uninteresting. Over all though, I liked it.

[megamanfan9647]

calm down

dam ppl calm down atleast this person was trying his best