U coukld of done better i think
It was funny, not laugh out loud funny. it could have been rendered better. The graphics were just ripped out of the snes video game. It could have been longer, it kinda ended abrubtly, kinda left me hanging. Meybe if you made a ¨the next day¨scene, it would be way funnier. :) also violence helps a lot in my opinion, although not always. i hope i didn´t discourage you from making others, but rather, in a way gave u ideas on how to improve? ^^; well i wish u luck. ...this got a tad long... :/