Good first attempt
It's refreshing to se people giving the ol' FBF a chance. You can do alot with tweening, but in my mind there will always be something special about a masterful piece of traditional animation.
That said, masterful this was not, but for a first try I have seen alot worse. Also, your music reminded me of that old cartoon Doug, so you get bonus points for making me get all nostalgic and misty eyed. I truly hope you pursue FBF, good luck in your future endeavors!
Thank you for the review. I enjoy the fbf, and hopefully will get better with more work and time :)
Upgrading from squares
Good to see that you're still putting yourself out there, but FBF may not be for you.
I'd highly suggest you looking into tweening. It may be the easy way out, but hey, it's a lot quicker and simpler to master.
We'll make a flash animator out of you yet, Mr. Brown. ;)
and I will keep trying! I am trying some new things here and there and trying to build up some "skill". Thank you sir.
its nice
and I don't want to discourage a first effort but first efforts really tend not to be submitable around here. After a few projects, you might be earning 10s and making feature of the week but relative to everything else on here that sticks -- I gotta be a d--ck here.
You ARE a dick!!! J/K thanks for taking the time to review and thanks for the advice.
Not bad!
Pros: The animation was pretty smooth, it was pretty good for your first FBF movie, and it reminded me of Gravity's just a theory.
Cons: It was too short, and the drawings seemed a little childish.
Overall: Good job! I hope to see more from you.
Thanks. Yeah, my drawing skills with a mouse are kinda.... weak. Thanks for the review!