The art for the girl was okay. The SF though doesn't always match the actions. Anyone whos actually had sex would know this. Another thing that bugged me was you couldn't touch her in the same place. One moment she likes it than she no longer wants that placed touched again. I don't expect the meter to go up after that spot is used but still a real girl isn't going to protest that spot touched once its been unlocked/allowed. I don't mind the lack of a story because this clearly wasn't meant to have one. Lack of a story may not fly in the future. Try to be more orginal and put more effort into this.