Good first try
Well, I'll be fair since this is your first flash and all, and just a test.
Okay, so your style is pretty good. The characters could use a bit more outlining; they look a little blurry. This is especially true for the first three. However, easily the strongest point of this is the facial expressions. Malus's "it's funny to me" face, and Zoey's "yeah, sure" face were absolutely spot on with what they were saying. You've definitely got a knack for that.
I would be oh so impressed if your animations were as beautiful as your artwork. But I'll be realistic, since animating things is a whole different ball game compared to just drawing a still picture.
So, it was good for a first animation. Now that you've got your first taste of flash, I for one would like to see you keep going.
And of course, the ending was full of "lol".