i also somewhat agree with stickman91.
although it was supposed to represent a documentary thats why i was monotone...it was very borring...the animation i think was good based on what was given to you. although u need a bit of help with lipsyncing.
Reviews for "Creation of the World"
Brewster responds:
True....
meh.
Nothing special. But it was an effort.
Since your on the topic Fun fact: Humans are more likely to evolved from marine creatures from the biological characteristics similarity then from apes. Wasn't that fun?
Brewster responds:
Twas fun.
I agree with everything Stickman91 said
The narration was dull and awkward. You need to have enthusiasm in what you say, otherwise no one's going to think it's funny.
But the animation was okay and the idea's nice, but as Stickman91 said, not well executed.
I also wish you good luck on your next entry.
Brewster responds:
Thanks. You can take up all the audio stuff zookyman2. He did the viocees, I did the animation.
Really good
Could use some better drawings, more imaginative of a plot. But other then that it was a good laugh. More dramatic pauses on the voice acting would be nice, and them tiny stutters people use.
Brewster responds:
K thanks.
Could have been funnier
the idea is amazing, but by making the voice of the narrator just boring it just didn't make the flash that funny, if the voice of the narrator was funnier then it would it would have been better
p.s. it is funny, but the way it was narrated just isn't
Brewster responds:
Ok thank you.