Pretty damn good
I really liked your style of art. It's really unique and it mixed with the music really well. Good length as well. One thing you can do at your level is to start using a template or something for your caption bubbles instead of hand drawing them. That would have made this flash look expertly done. I liked the way the map was drawing itself in front of him. Really neat. Good work, and keep up that creativity you've got. NG is lacking in that department lately.