There's nothing really wrong that would label this game as bad. It was different from other cursor games, especially with the concept of a "true" end.
A few things I think you should work on are:
Improve graphics so the game could be more visually appealing.
Fix grammar and spelling so the game can seem more professional.
Make the game longer and try to implement even more ideas.
Overall, a great game worth playing, but still has plenty of room for growth.