Nice
It startled me, and still does.
Reviews for "Dodraugen"
Assios responds:
Thanks ;p
It came out of it's *****!
The ending didn't really startle me that much because we all saw it coming. The photoshopping didn't really go with the movie because next to it was badly drawn pipes.
The art was pretty good if it only took you 5 hours but that just tells me that you didn't put much effort into it. But why did the snake thing come out off it's *****.it just didn't look right.
The thing that really scared me though was that guy's face. I mean seriously! THAT was the creepiest part. Oh yeah, what's with all of the retards reviewing you. THIS IS NOT COMMENTING. I try to say that to every submission that doesn't have at LEAST ONE GOOD REVIEW ON THE PAGE.
But you should at least put a picture on the loading screen because I got bored reading the text. What's with the music too? If you want to scare someone at least put SCARY music.
So like I said it didn't really startle me. It just made me open my eyes. Well here's the overall score:
Art 10/10
Origiality 10/10
Effort 6/10
Fear Factor 4/10
Concet 6/10
This is an OK flash I guess
Assios responds:
Thanks for a good review. The reason why I made it in like 5 hours, was that I wanted to submit it on Halloween. And yeah, I'll add a background picture to the preloader.
And for the music, I wanted to put "glad" or "normal" music when the guy is sitting there, and "scary" music (I used the Jaws theme) when the snake is crawling up the pipes.
Thanks :)
"Not bad. in fact... i like it!
7/10 & 3/5
I do agree a little bit with Darklight17, I also didn't really get it. But the scream at the ending was kinda funny, I wanna even hear it louder! But don't do it, it'll explode, so please, don't. Also, if it's next Halloween, make another one even better than this because this one I didn't really get but it's OK, this animation was still fine, but needs for awesomeness.
The graphics were fine also, but what I wanted the graphics to be a little better, but it looks cool, nobody's perfect. Anyway the character of that man looks good, but he kind of scared me when he started screaming, I mean it gave me a heart attack!
Also I agree with all these reviewers, it did look like you were rushing, but nice work you've done here, but nice idea with the title, DODRAUGEN, the toilet monster, it sounded good. And the ending of this animation was funny because something just cam out of no where and he is just doing nothing, would've he been dead already?
The guy's head was funny, but the thing that just popped out of no where was awesome, if I were you, I would make it a big giant lion instead lol. It's not a very good idea but, it would've been funny. But this animation was nice, even though, no body's perfect making best animations, hope you make another nice animation! Oh yeah, if your planning on an animation, could you please tell me what the animation(s) are about? I would really love to hear the animation.
I hope you have a good Christmas! And I hope you respond to my review! You know, I just love to get author's responses with a nice response review saying, "Thanks for your compliments." And, "Thank you for reviewing!" So hope you have a good Christmas!
You did a very nice job on this animation, but now here are my scores:
Graphics: 7/10
Comedy: 0/10 (Wasn't really a funny animation.)
Music: 8/10
Animation: 7/10
Creative: 7/10
Total Score: 7/10
Word: Good Halloween animation. But though you must not rush and make a better Halloween animation like this. Also, if you are planning on making a Christmas animation, make it more creative than this or next Halloween make another one better than this.
7/10 & 3/5
Now I hope you enjoy and love my review!
Characters remaining (Don't ask, I just lobe to do this :D): 1,799
Assios responds:
Whoa, thanks for an awesome review :O For the monster thing, I kinda wanted it to be a "new" monster, and thus not a lion or any other kind of existing "monster".. I know I rushed it as I spent like 3 hours on this, and next year I'll use more time on a Halloween submission, if I make one..
Again, thanks for a long and awesome review! :D
Low quality screamer
I think that you need to study more screamers, before you make one that's going to actually cause a good scare. Adam Phillips did one, where it was a radio report of a spate of kidnappings, where people were literally taken from homes, businesses and the like. Then the creature burst through the window and took the guy listening to the radio. That's a brilliant piece of research for you. You can find that toon on Weebl's Stuff.
The drawing style could use a little work - I'm not too sure about the guy's face shape, as it looks like you've drawn a face on a balloon, for some reason. If he's sitting on the can, have him do something - trousers around his ankles, grunts of effort, that kind of thing. Perhaps a copy of a newspaper, which the creature could burst through, for the punchline.
Did the evil thing have to look like a radioactive sperm? Just an observation there. I'm not sure that drain pipes have that many twists and turns in them - people like to keep them as straight as possible, as it saves on maintenance.
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Assios responds:
Yeah, I didn't really know how to do this screamer-thing when I started on it, had to make it in a few hours to upload it on Halloween. And for the evil thing, yeah, you're right :p I had to hurry a lot, so it turned out pretty bad.
Thanks for the review! ^^
Looks rushed
And it really is rushed if you did this in only 2 to 3 hours. The graphics look decent, even though the bathroom really looks like a living room, heh.
Also I wondered why he was sitting with his pants on on the toilet and the toilet seat wasn't even raised.
The sewers didn't look that realistic and the pipe was just odd. Looked like you only cut out those parts from the picture. Anyway, it looks weird and too rushed.
When that creature came out of the toilet the guy was still sitting there. Would have been better if he fell off the toilet or something, now the creature just goes right through him.
Anyway, if you can come up with such a movie in such a short amount of time then I really want to see some movies from you where you put more effort and more time in it. ^^
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Assios responds:
Yep, I rushed it cause I am also working on a much bigger project.. But if i'm going to make a halloween submission for next year, I'll make sure to start earlier:p
Thanks for the review:)