sweet
I'll I wanted was a Blizzard. hahah
sweet
I'll I wanted was a Blizzard. hahah
Hello??
Is this where i order the large cheese pizza?
Haha what
>:}
Smooth animation, great story, very original idea, but the voices were really hard to hear. I had to turn my sound all the way up to hear 'em.
But great work. Happy Halloween!
Sorry, I'm a moron with sound control. Thanks
Average
Opening statements:
~Funny for a short, and well animated as expected from reading your author's comments section. I was a bit disappointed that this was all it was, but it was worth my time.
Video:
~Everything flowed well enough, I knew what everything was and it looked like you put effort into it, very nice job overall.
~The shot decisions you made were excellent, and none of them confused me.
Content:
~There is no pause menu, therefore there is no quality adjustment, fast forward, or rewind feature.
~There is no scene select.
~There is a preloader and a play button that doubles as a replay button. Good.
Audio:
~Here is where you are weak, the voices kept on changing from too small to way too loud. Keep it consistent.
~The music didn't help the scenes much, if it got louder over a span of time it might have built suspense.
~Some of the actions or reactions were way too loud in comparison to the original reaction or response.
Closing statements:
This is average because I expect at least this much out of a passing submission. You did very well animating, if you want to get better, I suggest working on the quality of your audio. Well done.
Thanks I agree with everything except the pause menu and scene select things. This isn't YouTube man.
Beautiful!
nicelly voice acted and very nicelly animated flick
the quality and presentation are really great and the lines in all of your drawings are very consistent
youre gonna go pro!
Thanks man ;)