Was very pleasing to watch and had some good humor in there but a fair amount of superfluous talk (its too late for me to think of the proper word for it) made it almost not funny but I still VERY MUCH enjoyed it!
This kind of flash gets passed over as it's usually very monotonous but it was fairly upbeat and kept my attention which is a rare thing when I've got attention problems! lol!
I would suggest getting hold of, or reading up on the skills of a writer. They can take your concept humor and ideaology of how you want it all to happen by a comedy writer would inject that extra charm, hold the audience's focus and make it all snappy and 'complete'.
Please don't take this review as negative!!
Favourite bit was either the bit where the ghost fell through the floor and goes "DICK!" ..... or the bit where they talk about how unprepared they were to seige his castle!
Bravo, guys =)