LOL
Great Job man.
Especially liked the part where the girl said - Hi Jones .. and answer - WAAAAHAA.
:lol:
Reviews for "Jones Fires His Lazar Pt1"
Astrosebraxton responds:
thank you.
well
your better :D
almost there
your THIS |-| close, keep it up!
Nice.
Great story, but kind of lacking in the graphics department. Good Job Though.
well,well,well
i think you know who this is, anyways, overall...pretty good, i would recommend a better credits presentation for your flash, and perhaps some more content and pitch to flesh things out some more, but as a beginner, quite good.