I chuckled at the "pamp"-cakes's mouth movements. The eyes were very cute as well. I knew what was going to happen at the beginning, so no shcok comedy there. (A talking pancake can only have a few things done to it.) The fast pace was actually good for this short. It had a plot so mind-numbingly dumb that you can't help but find it humorous, which was a good combination. I'd have to say the best part of this flash was your voiceover. Hilarious not in the words that were said, but in the voice and tone.