Reviews for Pampcakes

[The-Critical-w00t]

Dawww! Cute.

I chuckled at the "pamp"-cakes's mouth movements. The eyes were very cute as well. I knew what was going to happen at the beginning, so no shcok comedy there. (A talking pancake can only have a few things done to it.) The fast pace was actually good for this short. It had a plot so mind-numbingly dumb that you can't help but find it humorous, which was a good combination. I'd have to say the best part of this flash was your voiceover. Hilarious not in the words that were said, but in the voice and tone.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Thank you! I suppose there is no shock value in eating a talking pancake...

[ZenJin]

lol!

It went exactly where I thought it was going to go, but I'm glad it did. Sometimes predictability is a good thing I guess.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Thanks! Yes, it was predictable, but pancakes are meant to be eaten, sentient or not.

[suki-satake]

Me?!

I've never done this xD. Poor panpcakes =/.

But what the point of the egg? He looked like the old man in monopolie's games board.

Goog jod.

PeteGrammarman responds:

You've never eaten pancakes? The egg is a typical British monocle, tophat wearing fellow, like I assume all people from Britain are. Thanks for the review!

[AtomicTomatoPotato]

Pretty good, just 1 thing

The voice acting could have used a bit of work. The toast and the egg were fine, just when the pancake was screaming in pain I think you could have made it a bit more believable. Other than that I think it was pretty good.

PeteGrammarman responds:

Yeah, my main gripe with this is my voice acting. I did it all in one take and I had very little prior experience. Thanks for the review and I do plan on practicing!

[Minex]

nice one

And shouldnt u be working on ur next project rather than replying to every single comment >>

PeteGrammarman responds:

I'm replying to this one just to spite you.