Ok start.
You require:
1. more story
2. a plot?
3. more story
4. Ok, so people killed each other? What else is new?
5. More pylons
6. Why people keep dying.
7. Some characters.
8. What the heck was the war? And the end scene; what was that about?
9. More story.
I guess that's it...
Wait... Did I mention that it needs a story?
Pretty good for your first. Keep practicing!
Thanks for comment. =)
Good for first
I liked it, it was fan freaking tastic, with lots o fun effects.
Only good report thank you =)
wtf was that
same as above what the fuck was that what the hell was the grim reaper part mostly he just floated across and made a noise and i am rating fair becouse this is ur first video this should get lower dont feel bad though u should get better and u did put more effort in this then most people do in their first videos
I`m not a specialist as you can see... =)
kool
good job dude