excellent
Brilliant stuff! the poem/lyrics were very well written but i woudl have slowed it down more at the start so you could build it up as it was quite fast, although the speed and monotone worked well none the less. very very nice!
Reviews for "The Tale of Mr. Carter"
great!!! love it!!
sad, spooky. but colors and pictures are beautiful . it seems like a poem then a story. maybe you can slow down the words??? oh, and the words rhymed beautifully. mr. carter seems half fish, half reptile and half zombie. I'm wondering if he's a fish, how does he survive without water??? and how does he know how to talk if zombies don't know how to talk? when you reply, can you answer my questions???
SamuriFerret responds:
I have no idea what Mr. Carter is. Perhaps that is part of the mystery - who is he and where did he get this obsession for smells?
Interesting...
It had an interesting story to it and flowed oh so smooth
SamuriFerret responds:
Heh, thanks for the input.
Loved it.
Everything ryhmed which you can never go wrong with. It has a halloween theme; and the story actually had a PLOT. You are going places my friend good job. This is more of what needs to be produced on newgrounds. The only thing that was bad was the graphics but then it's newgrounds so does it really matter?
GOOD JOB, I want to see more!
SamuriFerret responds:
Wow, thanks a lot!
good job
i really liked it, great halloween poem. very original and poetic. kinda sad ending tho, lol, but hey, great nonetheless. awesome job, guy :D 5/5
SamuriFerret responds:
Thanks very much dude!