Not good, Not bad
Wwell the story is pretty har to follow or understand at all, that characters don't have any personality and the music is just random songs, use more matching music. Also the flash is a little to slow so you easely get bored. The only thing that is actually rely good is the animations
Very nice...But
This was funny to watch.. and obviusly you have a talent.
The artwork was great, but the movie was missing a basic element.. animations,movement,sounds. While it was nice to watch, i felt like it was too slow.
I enjoyed your artwork more than the animation itself.
Try making a sequel or a new movie with a faster pacing!