I liked it
-maybe if you just added a quick wash of colour
increased the animation skillage a little
a bit more effort
concept needed more development also
usually when i'm procrastinating myself
well actually thats what i'm doing at the moment
yeah newgrounds,books,magazines,little spiders on my windowsill etc.
good flash for a first time though!
and the humour was funny
the sound didn't flow perfectly though
keep it up!!