My god, there is some plot... I think
This piece could have done with subtitles. A few more subtle attempts to round off this animation and you're talking serious consideration for one of the better flash that gets landed on the portal during Clock Day.
I actually found that there were some quite funny bits in there - the sipping tea, before throwing it over Tricky, the infinite pie dispensing prana that Tricky uses and the settling the piece like men at the end all raised a smile. Get yourself a subtitles bar across the bottom with an easily readable font in Black and white, so that people can understand what it going on. Then consider either heading for Speakonia or getting a better quality voice acting job, because I couldn't understand what was going on.
Finally, the artwork needs a tweak - colour within the lines. This doesn't make the fight scene any worse, but it does look pretty poor to start with. Getting over that hurdle is a major thing that you want to work towards.
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