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Reviews for "GOLEM"

It's not that developed

I don't know why, but it seems like so many animators are making weak stories. Sadly this one is included. There really wasn't any animation or sound to complain about and it was executed in a well done manner but it seems that the golem was just a pointless addition to the story. A heartbroken girl writes on a golem that apparently reacts to hate. So apparently this golem was just sitting there waiting for some bitch to cry a river upon it? I dunno, it just seems a mechanized being known as a golem kinda entices the viewer to expect more than just some petty revenge. Quite frankly, if it were a demon, or a monster, or hell a more demonic looking golem I think I could believe it more but the golem didn't really look the part to me, but that's more of my personal taster than anything. I just think the set up was a bit much for such a little quote. Now, if you were trying to aim for the beginning of a series I think I could appreciate this more and be less of a critical asshole, but if it's just for lol's sake, then don't have it occur under such a weak premise.

Pretty good

I love the Golem design and the final scene was quite good. Really, my only complaint is the reason behind the killing sucks, I mean, maybe if he cheated on her or something, but he sorta comes across as a decent guy who sat his girlfriend down and broke up with her when he didn't think it would work anymore and she's just a whiny emo bitch, but hey, maybe that's what you were shooting for and I just missed the point.

Confused about the plot

I'm confused, what exactly did Henry do that made her so mad? It opens with her confessing to a (at the time) inanimate rock that she loved someone else and that was the reason she left him. So she killed him because her heart went for someone else? Bit extreme. It is hinted that he did something horrible but I feel this animation would have benefited telling us what he did to her. I am also curious how police and such would react to this (in story). I gave a five both for the animation and the potential this work holds, I just feel it should have presented more as it is an interesting piece.

Okay...

Now you have to show what happened. Doesn't need to be in full graphic detail, you just need to show the guy and his look of terror before the Golem rips him apart like he ripped apart her heart!

You can use that line, I give you permission.

cool

The second I heard the pillows from FLCL I became an instant fan