This has potential
The animation was just a little sticky during the Neo twirl, but overall, this was pretty good. I actually like the see-through character...that could be your gimmick (the way Madness has no arms or legs). Music is good (duh!). It needs to be longer and tell a story. If you're going in the Madness venue, avoid speaking...every speaking madness I've seen does not have the right feel.
Keep it up. I liked this.