Great Work
A bit confusing with no border lines, but overall it was pretty darn good
Reviews for "PJ and The Claw Machine"
...bu-
no................no eco? =C epic sadness.
PJ-Olzow responds:
PJ will get the ecobat.......Someday
Still funny
For it being your old work it was kinda' funny. I like the paperclipslot-joke. I though the pigguy at the end was a little strange... Didn't get his motivation. If it was a cop I still didn't really get it... But still quite fun
Fun
I liked it. The music was great for this flash. Also it was a nice little story that everyone could relate to in some way, which helps to give me a little grin and smile. Thanks for deciding to submit it and best to you.
Flawed, but worthy of my quarter
Well, it's obviously a starter, but at least you had a plot, decent timing, ideas of humor, and knew how to fade out the music loop when it was done. Definitely no stick short. Ready to check out your other stuff.