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Reviews for "Ed & his inner demons #3"

So, KillFrog is back!

Well done, yet again, Kevin!

Haven't been to lively over your cartoons too lately, but it's good to see you are back!

Ed seemed a little too compitant this time... what happened? Did all those Margaritas and Bunnies "go to his head"?

Anyways, it's great to see you are making cartoons again, and I hope to see some more, if you choose to continue!

~SulkingKING~

kevinswearingen responds:

lol, thanks, this on is all a set up for #4. i'm still shaking the dust off of my skills. I'm going to try to nail the next one.

thanks man
peace
-kev

juaaaaaaasssss

look i never see that series its my firth time
the jokes is really good
the themons are awesome ^^
the history have sense with that two demons
exelent work ^^

Work on the pacing and get some background music.

Out of 1 and 2 which the pacing just made me bored.
The humor is kind of dry cept that t-shirt joke.

Now to 3 where the artwork has obviously improved.(10)
The humor has hit a 10 i actually laughed quite a bit.
However you still have work to do before i can consider these as great as they could be. You need to work on your pacing, You have a very slooooooooow pacing and good jokes are to far apart. This leads to a very slow and more harshly put "Boring" video. You have good idea and good humor. Your characters are great. More jokes, faster pace, and get yourself some background music to help fill in the slow moments where you want more storyline. This would help your videos so much. I have hope for you becoming one of my new newgrounds heroes. Just work on it!

Overall an 8.
But you could make it so much more.

Great job!!!

This is a great and original idea, congratulations it´s really great, just try not to extend some of the scenes too much, i started to lose it when the demons talked for such a long time, and BTW that taco is not how a taco looks like (im´from mexico so i do know :D) that´s more the idea of a taco that taco bell created.
anyway great job!!!

needs to be funnier

like the animation ill give you 10 for that but not as funny = an 8 rating