should have been a game
the drawing/animation could have been better
and
this just seems like it should be a game rather than a movie to me
you should make it a game and resubmit
Reviews for "MSN combat part 1"
hee he
it's kinda good for your first work :)
red-blood-p369 responds:
hehe thanks
lol
its me or u talk spanish .__. yeah i think XD
Not bad
The overall idea was alright, but the animation could definitely use some work
Work on the artwork
Some of the animation was smooth. The artwork is a little muddled and it makes it hard to make out what is happening sometimes. Dont know if one of the errors was the huge blood spot after one of the first shots, but shrink that down a little and make sure the character goes in front of the blood and not the other way around.
red-blood-p369 responds:
I'm wrong, I put that and then I could not fix more