Good story and funny concept
This was a good animation and I enjoyed it, but I don't find your depiction of the apple computers to be too accurate. Your version was a thriving metropolis that functioned like a well oiled machine, when too be honest, it's more like those programs are in a circle jerk, and when one of them finally gets off, it junks up the computer with it's rainbow colored children puddles.
I have used a mac and I see where your coming from and find the satire funny. As for macs, they have too strange of a cult following and one mouse button, plus the commercial are bullcrap.