Time for an un-bias review
The sound, there wasn't much of it besides the music.
Graphics, the drawings were pretty bad, and that leaves much room for improvement in the future.
And for the story, why was Master Chief bankrupt? If you added more to the story for why he is bankrupt, it would give you a little more credit for creativity.
So therefore, this submission gets a 3 star rating. Improve your technique, and try again. If you have been improving, your ratings will go up over time.