Nice.
Very good for a first flash. Only problem is the idea for Mario spoofs and stuff has been used and reused again and again. Gets old. But nice job.
Nice.
Very good for a first flash. Only problem is the idea for Mario spoofs and stuff has been used and reused again and again. Gets old. But nice job.
Okay
The composition was a bit contrived, but the jokes were decent, and I chuckled once or twice. Pretty decent first try.
Could've been better.
The animation is pretty good, especially for a beginner. I can tell you are well on your way to becoming a great animator. My problems with this are few, but impact it greatly. The main problem is just that I do not laugh when watching it. The humor is typical and recycled, so try being more original and coming up with something new. Also, on a different note, the background is slightly blurred and so are some of the sprites. that makes it kind of annoying to watch. Yet, this is a pretty good animation, I hope to see more of you iin the future. Good luck!
Eh...
The animation and such was good for your first, but try different sprites. Also, try working on the humor bit too.
Otherwise, it was good for a first flash.
lol
lmao dude. it was real good (my opinion) and funny