hey OB
happy b-day yo hope u like bein 16 its really boring.
Reviews for "OrangeBeef B-day"
Noel-Ranger responds:
yeah
Hmmm, Third time's the charm...
I actually found the music quite enjoyable. The rest of the animation leaves something to be desired.
I must admit, I was hesitant to write a third review, after my others have been so unceremoniously destroyed. Still, I'll try again. Also, I feel the need to apologize. My previous reviews were less than polite, so I hope to remedy that problem this time.
May I first begin by saying that the balloons were particularly well drawn. And the music was phenomenal. It managed to make an extremely annoying song quite enjoyable. There was a problem with the moving pictures, though. You see, every so often, the beef would pass over the orange, obscuring it from veiw. Also, the text in the background was a bit hard to read, as it was rather messy. As with the foreground text. I also noticed a typo. You spelled 'you' wrong.
Anothing thing. There wasn't much substance to the animation, as a whole. It's a tribute to this orange-beef fellow, I understand, but the animation doesn't serve to tell us anything about him. Or her, as it may be. Needless to say, I think this probably would have gotten the message across if you had sent it privately to the person, as opposed to putting it up here.
I can't think of much else to say, so thank you and good night. Good luck!
Noel-Ranger responds:
I actually found the music quite enjoyable. The rest of the animation leaves something to be desired.
I must admit, I was hesitant to write a third review, after my others have been so unceremoniously destroyed. Still, I'll try again. Also, I feel the need to apologize. My previous reviews were less than polite, so I hope to remedy that problem this time.
May I first begin by saying that the balloons were particularly well drawn. And the music was phenomenal. It managed to make an extremely annoying song quite enjoyable. There was a problem with the moving pictures, though. You see, every so often, the beef would pass over the orange, obscuring it from veiw. Also, the text in the background was a bit hard to read, as it was rather messy. As with the foreground text. I also noticed a typo. You spelled 'you' wrong.
Anothing thing. There wasn't much substance to the animation, as a whole. It's a tribute to this orange-beef fellow, I understand, but the animation doesn't serve to tell us anything about him. Or her, as it may be. Needless to say, I think this probably would have gotten the message across if you had sent it privately to the person, as opposed to putting it up here.
I can't think of much else to say, so thank you and good night. Good luck!
Failure.
Your making a cheap-ass ode to one of the worst spammers on ng? Oh well its kind of fitting seeing how its the same quality as his work. Improve on the animation, dont just use random pictures off the net next time, and make a tribute to something people enjoy.
Noel-Ranger responds:
fuck you, at least I do something to make people happy, you only insult people, so you deserve the failure