nice
if the song was better (:
but still good
Reviews for "RE: Your brains"
Great job man, great job.
Im glad you choose this hilarious song of the one and only Jonathan coulton.
The animation were good and you finally synched so now the song fits perfectly to the animation. You have one little mistake. Bob is the zombie and tom is the humen who is about to get eaten and the main charcter's name tag said hes name is bob.
Hehe but who cares, as long as you will continue posting these animations of JC I might have a new favorite artist.
And for the next one I thought of these songs. I think these will go really great on animations like yours.
Heres the list: I feel fantastic, Allways the moon, The presidents, Over there, Not about you ,Flicker and Im your moon. Plz consider making the next one, one of these songs. If you need any ideas for your next one (even if it won't be one of the songs above) you may PM me (and belive me I have some good ideas).
Keep listening to JC and most importantly, HAVE FUN.
Aloname.
mrslovett responds:
lol your right someone pointed it out to me earlier xD
icant believe i miss read that
LOL how funny i was thinking of doing a first person perspective of a town for the song flikr! :D
and after i do flikr ill do any one you want if you wish any and with your ideas ill credit you 'cause you give me great reviews and its nice to see a fellow joco fan! :D
and with each animation i get better so ill progress :)
so pm me at any time :)
Loved it
So what if he messed up the animation it probably took along time to make the song and it was pretty catchy.10 STARS
wow
i completly agree with u cyber monkey u said everything i thought and more so ill just say i agree with u....... yea...... but nice effort ont teh vid
Great song, but sloppy execution
I loved the song you chose, it was definitely very catchy and funny. Unfortunately your actual animation left a lot to be desired. I saw a lot of corners were cut, you used tweens when really they shouldn't have been used and it took away from the animation. You didn't redraw limbs so when you tweened them the other end of the appendage would stick out from the body or just move awkwardly making nothing about their movement organic or natural in any way. Another HUGE corner that was cut is that you just reused that same part for the chorus three times in the animation. Now this is more understandable because the song is long but really it gets boring for the viewer. This choice is definitely more forgivable because this saved you hours upon hours of extra work coming up with new animation ideas for the other choruses. Leaving many details and crude tweens unaltered though is less forgivable which is why I give you a lower score, really shape tweens should be left alone most of the time, especially for gore effects. One last thing that maybe shouldn't bother me but REALLY does is that your character who is the survivor has a name tag that says Bob. Yet the narrator, or singer, is singing from the perspective of Bob. Bob is the Zombie and Tom is the survivor. I realize this shouldn't be much of an issue but if you take the time to animate an entire song, attention to a detail as big as that should be payed attention to. Overall nice work though, and just don't get lazy or sloppy by the end. I mean really it takes five minutes to throw on a replay button which greatly increases it's overall presentation, rather then having an anti-climatic finish greeted with no credits or information on the artist and just a blank screen.
Good Work, take what I said into consideration, and I still enjoyed the animation greatly!
-Zeph R
mrslovett responds:
i know i kept thinking the names were th opposit way round for some reason didnt realise till i finished and was like ohhh sugar! but i didnt think anyone would really notice, but clearly you have a keen eye ;D
yes i did forget a replay button and i agree did look sloppy
and the whole thing with tweening how else do people make everything move is there a secret im unaware of or do you just draw it differently in different frames?
because i really want to get away from that sloppyness too!!
im sure theres an easier way so if you do know a way feel free to pm me thanks!
but i take your review into great consideration and i highly appreciate it! :)