okay.....
in a teaser you should really put more in it to "tease" people into wanting to watch the series..
Reviews for "Dragon Ball AR Teaser"
nice one
but too short
Well
It's a teaser, so there isn't really much to say. except:
The music didn't quite fit the story. You should make momentum by adding a mysterious music, instead of a bit too fun music.
The sprites look good to me, but I can't really say so, for you can barely see it.
I hope you have some skill in flash and sprite, for it's pretty hard to make such series to a succes. You shouldn't try anything if you aren't up for it.
What I don't understand is why it needs to be a rip-off of dragonball Z/GT. There already are like 3 of those with succes, and hunderds unsuccesfull. If there keep coming more, people WILL get bored, and vote less.
Maybe you should make another name for it, and a bit different storyline you intended to, because a bunch of bad guys trying to destroy the world, isn't exactly the most original idea in the world.
Not much to say ;)
Anyway good luck on the series!
kixx6 responds:
Wow. well i didnt really know there were alot of flash series resolving around Dragon Ball because i dont really visit Newgrounds that often. Im kinda new. This is my first video. And the storylines pretty diffrent from that but as i said, im not gonna reveal the plot just yet.
Thx for the health crit btw its a lot more helpful than most of em.