Quite good.
Good setting, nice angle, great cast, just improve the drawings and you might get a 10.
Reviews for "Sleepless Ep.1"
Good to the very end
Good artwork, story, and characters cant wait to see episode two.
Nice work..
Just as confusing as any real anime lol. I noticed you had a comment on your 'writing', it's more like a hell load of spelling mistakes, but that doesn't matter much, because atleast you had subs, and we could understand what they were saying, but for example, you wrote 'Sense' instead of 'Since'. Anywho, the plot was a little messy, took me a while to understand what was what, but either way, it's a great job, nice characters, can see alot of development to come out of them, and a lengthy story ahead. Keep it up. :D
Not bad
Its a little confusing since your starting us off in the middle of the action, of two sets of character even, but so far its interesting. The voice work sometimes seems a bit unrehearsed. Sometimes there aren't pauses where there would be in normal conversation, which takes away a bit from the dialogue. Other than that, keep up the work, and hopefully with experience, the entire project will improve.
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look inside the inbox...
alot of people must have PMed you