Well, here's my review:
- There is a nice rythm in it, and it is a dance song while actually beign relaxed at the same time, something I actually didn't thought that could even happen, so congrats on this part!
- You could have a better work on the loop, as it is both a dance/relaxing song it in interesing to have a nice loop also it encourages remixing it later if it's of interest.
- I read that you are planning on adding a piano in place of the verse instrument, and though I think it would be nice, I fear it may lose some of the dance style, so if you can make it work go ahead, as the song can go to another style (not a bad thing entirely by the way).
Last but not least, I found it VERY well done and would love to hear more from you, keep sending new songs!
Well that's my opinion, I also added it to my favorites list.