It looks like you have a lot of potential.
Artwork was okay...
Animation was pretty good (especially for a first). I'm usually pretty picky about lipsync, and it may need work. I think the audio was lagging a bit, but it may have been my shitty computer.
The voice acting was good.
Content was good, for a short random flash. Weird and a little retarded, but acceptably so, not completely over-the-top stupid (which I find refreshing).