It's not bad...BUT it isn't quite 10/10 material. ALMOST but not quite. Most of the issues stem from the inconsistencies overall. This has more of a nu-metal/prog-metal feel to it, but the actual musical notions, with the sweep arpeggios and the augmented and diminished licks put it out of touch with either or. The easiest way to rate this would be to compare it to Iron Maiden... hear me out. A LOT OF WASTED POTENTIAL. I mean that in the nicest way possible, as a death metal musician myself. The drums were too biased to the 4/4 and 6/8 time signatures, if you would have thrown in more 1/8 or 2/8 (Thrash- or Speed-Metal flavor) to it, and even like cut out the guitar (or drums) for like two or three seconds and done like a single-instrument bridge (literally, for like TWO or THREE, maybe even FOUR seconds) It would have sent it over the top (13/ or 14/10 over the top!). Also you should have done the guitar harmonies with a minor or a augmented/diminshed voicing. When the harmonies have a major voicing it makes them sound like spider or power chords, they also sound, dread I say it, synthetic. IF THEY ARE... GO BACK AND TRY AGAIN, and put in some more hours! Otherwise, if not, disregard that statement, and keep workin' on it. Solid 7.5/10! I see a 12/ or 14/10 in the future if you keep it up.