Nice!
Its rather funny!!!! watch it and laugh!!!
Nice!
Its rather funny!!!! watch it and laugh!!!
*Long Review*
Well, disagreeing with some people, I actually quite like the animation. It has a style. Sure it is disproportionate at times, but overall it's fine. I've seen much, much worse. Three-fourths of the jokes on this were good, with great timing and presentation. The others have been said many times before that I have gotten tired of it. I'm sure if a different person who hadn't heard it as much would have liked them, but that's them. (An example of a bad joke was when they did the dramatic sound before he said "that's the Pentagon!" This could have not been meant as a joke, but traditionally how I hear it is used in a humor sense.) What I did like was the pizza employer with the "CUT YOU!" phrase. That sort of joke is never used enough these days. Anyway, I know later I'm gonna realize I forgot to say something, but for now this is good. Keep going with these, you have an original and good idea here.
PS When you said "Special Delivery" in the title, I got a completely different message. X3
you did a good work but...
I give you a 7 because the body proportion of the characters look horrible :D
but ere so good your idea
see ya
good
the ending ruined it other that that it was realy funny
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