Congratulations on your front page feature! This is a very strong track. One of the key phrases in your description in my estimation is "tightly woven"--the elements of this music really are very tightly woven together, organized and performed. I would be hard-pressed to provide criticism of any element singularly. This tightness, combined with what feels to me the perfect length for this material, makes this movement one of your best short works. Keep it up!