A Good Start
From what I saw I think that you have an excellent foundation for something to really blossom out of this! The music and sound effects were on point as well as the "general" outline for the animation.
Reviews for "Madness Assasination: KT"
cool
the drawing was good but u us some sprites of krinkels too but i always cool but very short
A little short
This flash is a little short which does not warrant my usual 1,000 character reivew, but I will try to add as much of it as I can. The assasination is really good. A little short and sweet, but that's all you need to tell.
Maybe an escape scene could make it a lot better. The song could be way better. I remember how it went and heard it all the time on youtube. But now when I go and try to find it, nope. Nothing. It went duuuh duuh in a sort of techno style thing and everyone used it in pwnage videos of things. Had no words, that sort of thing. Maybe it was DJ something, but I'm not short.
The thing I found the most funny was that Mr.Freeman was there, just probably as some sort of joke. Or maybe he was part of it? Who knows.
C-Doodlez-Man responds:
Mr. Freeman was apart of it man! Not really, just seeing how many people would notice, which most do. I'm currently working on the next madness assassination which takes place in Nazi germany. I am using alot of this critisim to improve.
Well Done
I hate Madness (originals) but this spin-off was pretty decent. I liked how you added more detail to the characters, and used an actual part of American History as your "template idea" for this flash.
Cal.
C-Doodlez-Man responds:
thanks thanks
Below average
This one was tricky, I initially wanted to give you a below average/ failing, then I thought harder, and looked at some of the other reviews and had a slight change of heart, mainly because I saw everything they did from the accuracy of the flash to its inherent shortness. This is what I observed:
-It was good for a madness short true, but I KNOW you can do better than this. If I didn't I might have even considered giving you an average. The car was a box, the sniper rifle wasn't as detailed as it could have been, and every structure from the buildings to walls was drab or freakishly square.
-The credits rolled too fast, making a replay button unnecessary, but I didn't pay attention to the credits and I refuse to go out of my way even in the slightest to do so.
-The music was fitting, I can almost say I'm proud of you for putting it in with the flash.
-For a madness short, it's almost perfect because of how you drew all the people, and the fact that everyone's arms are missing is also an obvious sign.
-The best thing you did here, was the transitioning, I had to watch it multiple times just to see every transition, you're better than actual editors in movies. Of course, you only had a few seconds, but this is also a plus. If I ever want anything edited, I would come directly to you. But I would kindly ask you to skip the gunshots.
All in all, you know what's wrong with the flash and don't really need anyone to help you. Make it longer, tone down the shot a bit, (or up the music) and keep your transitions as good as in this flash (it was the biggest factor in uping your rating).
C-Doodlez-Man responds:
Thanks alot, that review was a big help. Thanks for the compliments to :D