Needs better story
I loved the first one, and was pissed when I couldn't get this one to play on any one of the three computers I tried. But I finally got it to work :) . And it was worth it!
But I couldn't help but think how great this could be with an actuall solid and clear story. Take the Castle Series... your art is just as good and your animation just as awesome (both in their own way though.) I very rarely say anything that isn't positive, but this series and you, have SO much potential, that I had to say something. Even though chances are you won't take notice of this review let alone care.
Clear story or not, this is certainly worthy of a 10. You are one hell of a talented guy, and this is one hell of an artistically stunning piece.