Hmm....
To the animator: I see some decent effort in this, but like others said, it kinda resembles madness. The fight scenes were kinda slow making the guards seem a bit stupid since they just seem to be standing there, however since the story was excellent, and the humor was ok, I'll give you a decent score.
To Fatkidwithajetpack: You did pretty well making a slightly unique voice for all the characters, but there was one or two moments where the guards sounded exactly alike to one another. Might wanna improve on that if your aiming for the top.