if u cant get the white one
go black :)
i think this was hilarious, keep up the work.
Reviews for "Chess Tale"
how quaint
I liked it, it was a little inspirational, good design, great concept.
ahhhhhh reminds me in my first battle i had
not sword i was helping my firend sniping the enemy my general hated me like the girl chesses daudher(well im 21 thats why im in my friends army)so i was a private sniper and i saw his daughter and fell in love with her so she did that to then one sergeant wanted to mary her i killed him and my squad still didnt kick me the general didnt kick me from the army the after the enemy general died i saw the enemy daudher and fell in love wit hher that really happend
Nice story, great song, sad that white/princesdumb
Great job on making a cute little chess story. I am a bit sad that the white pawn/princess was so dumb. I mean the little white boy pawn saved her from the black knight and she ends up going after the mean white knight. Then the white knight tries to kill the white pawn before they get married and turns out that the white knight was once a pawn. Either way, I am glad the white pawn did not end up with the mean white pawn/princess; although I would have liked her to be a bit smarter and the story along the lines of a her parents forcing her to marry the knight when she did not want to and then her parents finding out that the knight was once a pawn, and then being ok with her marry the white pawn. I think that would have made a better story.
The song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW this song rocked! I would love to have it! I hope that website gets up soon!!!!
EduLimongi responds:
It´s up ^^ the song it´s not up for grabs yet but PM me your msn and i will send it to you. thanks for the review.
happy ending please
what the hell? ok saves the girl then stops the wedding then gos for the black one! she was even giveing him looks i mean come on! 5/10 for makeing a stupid ending i think that after he crashed the wedding he should of gone up there and marred her The End and that would of been a great ending but no you had to piss me off