Give yourself a pat on the back.
First off I would just like to congratulate you on the wonderfull flash. This is truely somthing to be proud of and many animators, artists, and writers could only dream of putting a project of the magnitude in their resime. And so the criticisms begin...The first thing that crossed my mind when thinking of this review is that it was far too anime-ish for my tastes. The white hair, the increadably buff guy with an "x" on his chest (he might want to get that checked out, it looks infected) the woman finding him in the middle of a FUCKING DESERT. Still, it was very nice art. But the animation went up and down on my "omigod people move that way" scale. You just got lazy on the lip-synicing and the walking cycles at times looked almost robotic. The voice acting was at times very good and other times could be compared with "All your base are belonging to us." (do you see a pattern devloping here?) It was bareable at those moments and I still kept watching so mission accomplished on that part. Overall, I enjoyed it. Everything else was fantabulous. The camera angles, the music, the landscapes, the whole idea, all of the extraas, a very small sneak peak into the future episodes, ect. So I do look foward to the rest. And with a prologue this long I'm sure we're in for a ride. You did say in the concept art that it began in what, 2004? Better pick up the pace. You have some fans now. I'm sure you can get an advertisement deal of some sort though. Anyways, good luck, God bless, and maybe you can hold us over with some short animations in the mean time, eh?