Not great...
I'm sorry but this is a joke for eleven year olds when they first hear the term. The animation was very poor, it's essentially a slide show, you need to animate full motion or establish a montage-effect, this did neither, and looked akward. You've got the beginnings of a good drawing style but it's not there yet. Try background or something, and the recording quality wasn't great, I'd try and get a voice actor next time if you can. Not the worst thing ever but needs a lot of work...