an admirable venture
I have to say it now, this wasn't graphically impressive in the general sense. I do, however, like your camera angles and effects a lot.
As a story, this was definately a lot more adventurous than the standard NG full-length flash. I like how you blended the dementia/fantasy with reality in such contrast, I actually found myself by 2 minutes in getting slowly dragged into the storyline just to see what madness will come up next.
I could write quite a lot more, but I'll finish up by just saying that I'm very pleasantly suprised at how much effort you put into making this into a real kind of 'short movie', instead of just masking a dull story with snazzy animation.
It could always have been better graphically, but for now this thing is great.