Sweet. I think the opening and closing really did it. I also like the build-up.
Reviews for "Locked Up"
JimmyTheCaterpillar responds:
We were gonna cut that out, but it sounded really good. So we kept it. Glad you like it.
Very nice summer tune reminds me if the good ol times I was summering in the summer as a little kid
aside from the recording, again, good riffs in here. couldn't really hear the drums as clear as everything else, but as we approach your newer songs, I'm sure you've addressed the input audio recording issue.
JimmyTheCaterpillar responds:
Thank you, people! x2
Hm, I'm not sure what I should think about this. I like the main riff here, it sounds pretty funky. But what I'm missing here is some good drum work and much more bass. Right now this sounds as if it was recorded in a tin can. No bass present here at all.
However, I liked the ending here. We can hear some muffled sounds and it seems as if someone is leaving the room and the door closes. This is a nice gimmick, in my opinion.
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As others have mentioned, it's the lack of recording quality that is killing the quality of this song. I want to love what you've written, but the recording quality is making that difficult.
The other thing wrong with your song is the lack of a good bass line. Most compositions NEED a good bass line to have adequate substance. Any bass that is in your song is almost impossible to hear.
JimmyTheCaterpillar responds:
Thank you for the review, but frankly the song is supposed to sound like that in my eyes, so suck as it may, it's the way it is.