This animation does showcase your talent
And we can see you are an animated cartoonist. But the subject matter was unappealing.
Usually works that don't really have a subject tend to make up for that by conveying a message or being downright quirky. This didn't convey much of anything, and it could have used more quirk.
It may not have been meant to be funny, but it hit me with the same affect as an unfunny joke. Not memorable.
Don't let this discourage you. I'd like to see more of your work, but with a different approach.