Sorry
I think the main problem here is the song itself. The animation was great, but the song did not match. It started off really well, but it never really went anywhere. Where the animation was slow, the song was slow, good. Where the animation was fast and furious, the song was STILL slow, bad combination. It should have been there that the drums and electric guitar came in, as well as an increase in tempo. Maybe you were trying something new? I dunno, but it didn't impress me, though it may have with others. Roller coasters may not have been the best topic in this song, because they're supposed to be intense, and this song doesn't mix in my opinion. Such a sweet voice would sound better singing about something... more tame, I think. But don't give up just because of one person's thoughts, you may make something similar to this in the future that actually appeals to those like me. So keep it up, and good luck! 3/5