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Reviews for "The Rainbow Song [WIP]"

good composition :3 nice work!! 5/5 10/10 !!!!!!!!

Troisnyx responds:

Thanks ^_^' Glad you liked it.

I like this, reminds me of Sonic or Mario, and where the instruments aren't particularly my thing it's a really good piece of music, nice one.

Troisnyx responds:

Thank you! I'm not sure if Sonic is going to be one for sparkles, glitter and rainbows (Mario's a little more that type). Glad you liked it! : )

Start 0:12

The day I met you, you just smiled to me
Times past by, you told me to be your friend.
I was so relieved to be with you.
I called you today just to hear your voice.
An angel was hanging by to bless me.
She said "Please protect her with your strength."
I promised her with my heart.
She was the only one that showed me the rainbow.

I want you, you might think about it
I miss you, you might be alone
I hold you, you might feel my warm
I kiss you, you might wish this never ends
The voice of you inside my head
That I will never forget

Where are you and I'm so worried
I cannot sleep I cannot dream tonight
I need someone and always
This sick strange darkness
Comes creeping me on so haunting every time
And as I stared the stars I wish you
To come home tonight and stay with me
When you come back, my days became colorful.


I want you, you might think about
I miss you, you might be alone
I hold you, you might feel my warm
I kiss you, you might wish this never ends
The voice of you inside my head
That I will never forget.

02:13 End.

I'm not a good lyrics writer nor a professional singer. I just thought of some words that I randomly spoke from my mind so I wrote 'em down. Hope it helps with better lyrics or you might use this. ;)

Troisnyx responds:

Thanks for the attempt! I haven't got many lyrics ideas yet, but I'll tell when the final result is out. : )

Nice! I particularly like the solo at 3:00. It has a feel-good vibe. All it needs is vocals, and then you'd have a great composition going.

Troisnyx responds:

Any lyrics ideas please? :3 I'm kinda clueless...
But I'm really glad you like it! Thank you! x