Oh man, oh man, where do I start.
The intro was a mix of typical Hania-styled slow vocal build-up complemented by the piano, but there was a clear influence from ED on the tune (the time opposition between the drums and the piano especially appealed to me from a drummer's POV), which overall sounded fantastic. I could see the slow build-up into the main riff, but to be honest there were a couple of parts where the drums felt a bit off IMHO; I think it could've used a little more snare on some parts of it, and perhaps a speedy break to transition into the riff, but overall it was pretty good.
The main part of the song was pretty well-done; the melody itself didn't try to overcome the lyrics and even though the lyrics were speedy, their placement on the track made them quite easy to follow and understand, even without looking at the script in the description. The only thing that was a bit off was the volume of the vocals, which imo could've been mixed a bit louder than that, since Hania's singing voice is naturally a bit soft. I suppose it could be worse if ED added his typical shreds in the verses and chorus, but it all turned out pretty neat in the end. As for the solo, well, I liked it, but that's a bit more subjective I guess, so I'm just gonna leave it at that.
Overall, this is a great track, one I'm definitely downloading! I just wonder why I didn't find out about this the minute it came out.