Keep it up
Can't wait for the sequel, hope it won't take too long.
Reviews for "Hitman's job part 0"
sam-delitans responds:
ermm, it may take quite long..
O.O woah
This is an AMAZING story. I cant wait for part 2. and part 3 and part 4. ^^ i hope u make that many atleast. Good luck and may writer blocks stay away from u. Kept the suspence flowing
sam-delitans responds:
err, there is no part 3 & 4. only part 2 but it will be about 10 min long again. so yea, thanks a lot for your comment! just to spoil a bit, there is a twist at the end of the story.. :P
Here is a tip
A 9 out of 10 because this is really cool... but you need to get different voices for each characters.
sam-delitans responds:
in part 2, yea, i'll get more charactors to act :) thanks
I enjoyed it
I think your attention to detail was good. You might want to work on making it more fluid though. For the most pert, really good. Can't wait to see the next one.
sam-delitans responds:
really? wow thanks :)
good
good story 5/5
sam-delitans responds:
thanks